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Post by Elliot's Girl on May 31, 2007 20:38:26 GMT -5
The Great Kutcher Pine Tree.......did you use Ashton Kutcher's last name for that? ROFL! Weird, nice battle scene with the guy. I'd knew Elliot and the team would beat them. But the kissing part......ewwwww! XDD
Can't wait to see what the next chapter will be. Hopefully this story will come to an end soon. ^^
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Post by elliotdude on Jun 19, 2007 10:05:20 GMT -5
Sorry fo the loooooooong wait...again. But now here it is Scene 14 of Elliot's Academy:
(Deer cheer and applaud for Elliot, Floyd, Gus, Clyde, Monroe, and Lazlo coming out of the woods and riding on top of 6 deers. The Alpha 5 Squadron gets down from the deer and takes a bow.)
Floyd: Thank you. Thank you. (Cheering and applause dies down)You know, let me just say it was a heck of a fight. But none of this would have happen, without our great leader: Elliot the 4th!
(Elliot is then missing)
Monroe: Elliot?
(Elliot runs away to find Giselle. Giselle is eating some grass on hill.)
Elliot: Giselle!
Giselle: Elliot?
Elliot: Giselle! Baby! I'm back! And darling do I have stories to tell you!
Giselle: Elliot, you gotta get here...now.
Elliot: Why? You won't believe it. Me, my friends... defeated the wolf king. We stopped the war.
Giselle: Elliot I'm so happy to hear that but you don't understand who is here now.
Elliot: I'll tell who's here now: you and me. I'm so excited I have to kiss someone. Kiss me you fool!
(Elliot kisses Giselle for a long time. Suddenly a shadow looms over them. Elliot looks and the kissing stops. It's Ian)
Ian: What is this suppose to be, MAGGOT!
Elliot: Sir..I...uh...didn't know...sir!
Ian: You know better than to kiss my mate.
Giselle: Look, Ian. He didn't know. It's not his fault.
Ian: Silence! Never have I seen anyone kissing my girl. Especially you! You should know better!
Elliot: It won't happen again sir. I promise you sir.
Ian: Oh, I know it won't happen again. Because you're BANISHED!
Elliot: What?
Ian: You heard me. Pack up your things and get out!
Elliot: But...I didn't know....uh...fine. I'm going. (Elliot walks sadly away on both 4 feet)
Giselle: Why would you do something like that? He told me he defeated that wolf king.
Ian: I don't care. It isn't right. But there is no other choice.
(Ian walks away. Giselle sees Elliot walking sadly away. End of Scene 14.)
Stay tuned for Scene 15
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Post by Elliot's Girl on Jun 19, 2007 18:03:48 GMT -5
About time you updated! Weird....someone posted here a strange post I couldn't tell what it was. It had strange markings on it, I wasn't so sure if that was you or not as a guest that posted that. Anywho......I hate to say this, but....seeing Elliot kissing Giselle......ewww! That explains how Ian kicked his butt out of the herd! I thought for sure it be ending for now, how many more chapters do you have left Elliotdude?
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Post by elliotdude on Jul 2, 2007 13:20:10 GMT -5
Sorry once again for the long wait. But here it is, The 15th and Final Scene of Elliot's Academy:
(Elliot walks sadly out of the forest. Just then....)
Floyd: Elliot! Wait! Stop. Wait, wait, wait. Elliot, where are you going?
Elliot: Ian kicked me out because I kissed Giselle. I have to go to the Forbidden Zone.
Floyd: The Forbidden Zone? But there are hunters out there you'll get killed!
Elliot: Who cares?
Floyd: I do. Do you know what's in 4 days? Open Season! The deadliest day of the year.
Elliot: Look. Maybe this is what's best. Explore a new world with new friends.
Floyd: If that's what you want, then fine. It won't be the same without you....buddy.
Elliot: Thanks. Tell the others I'll missed them.
Floyd: I'll miss you too. (They both hugged and Elliot leaves. Nighttime. Elliot is eating some grass near a highway.)
Elliot (narrating): Well, that's my story, since then, I've never seen my team or the love of my life. But I know sometime, somewhere there comes a time when you got toi get a new life. (Elliot sees a light) And always expect the unexpected. (Then he sees two lights. It's Shaw's truck and then pitch black and we hear a bump. Don't worry everyone. Elliot's fine. He'll return in the movie. End of Elliot's Academy.)
That's it. I hope you enjoyed my prequel to Open Season and to everyone's favorite one-antler mule deer.
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Post by Elliot's Girl on Jul 3, 2007 0:13:27 GMT -5
Nice chapter. My POV story was more different than the one you did, but this one was good. Like the ending, and by that, I mean the final one, not the other one with him kissing Giselle. That part annoy me....A LOT! I didn't think it was gonna be the same night where Shaw ran him over. But....again, it was a nice fanfic. Thank you for sharing that with us Elliotdude.
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